Rating 1 / 5
For the editing it gets a 1 due to the use of present and past tense in paragraphs next to each other
For the story it gets a 1 as their is no real payoff
Transformation wise it might get a 2 if it was not for the rest of the problems
Overall it can pretty much be summerised as theif steals the wrong thing and is turned into a female naga.
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